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20th March, 2008. 6:40 am. Benaedin's Promise: Chapter One: A Promise Broken; Installment Two

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As the firewood touched the fire, green sparks flew out of it.

"Emeryc, are you there?" A female voice was carried on the sparks.

"Xara? Hold on, I will make my end stronger," Emeryc replied. He placed his last piece of firewood on the flames and focused his attention on them. The log caught alight instantly and his fire began to burn with a pale green light behind it. Xara's voice came out of the flames. She sounded panicked.

"Is it safe to come through, Em?"

"Yes. What's wrong? Why aren't you with Tham and her family?"

"I'd rather tell you when I get there," she replied. Emeryc heard her mutter the two syllables that she required to make her fire stronger, followed by the seven to create the connection so that she could travel between the two fires. This was followed by the eight syllable spell that sent her traveling as fast as a blink along the connection. Emeryc's fire burned a bright green and Xara stepped out of the flames. She ran straight into his arms. "Em, it was horrible. They burnt the house down with everyone inside. They didn't even spare little Sirae. Not even little Sirae. She died in my arms. The last thing that she said was 'Aunty Xar, why aren't you burning?'" Xara was sobbing between every few words. "The flames were hot enough to even affect Tham. What hope did the rest of the family have if a fire-healer was burned?"

Emeryc was surprised, but after his initial pause, he but hi arms around his wife and hugged her, as his still half asleep mind processed what she had just said. He shook his head, thinking that he might have misheard her.

"Xara, what happned?"

"The Seekers came to my village. They tested every little child. All of those who, if they were Talented, would not have had the chance to learn how to control their Talents to hide them. Of course Sirae was discovered and you know the penalty for being discovered with Talents." Xara's voice quietened. "Except now they punish the entire family. 'To eradicate such a horrid disease', the Seekers say."

"The entire family? Then we have lost the Mildthryth line? All this time, all that we have done, all that we have been through... has it all been for nothing?"

"It couldn't be for nothing, Em," Xara said. "The Powers would have stepped in if that was the case. There has to be something that we've overlooked. Something that we should have thought of." She was struggling to hide the annoyance in her voice, that Emeryc was more worried about their mission than about herr

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19th March, 2008. 6:31 pm. Benaedin's Promise: Chapter One: A Promise Broken; Installment One

There was a small campfire alight in a clearing not too far off the South Boatent Way. It had burned low, untended, as the man who lit it was asleep next to it. The fire was positioned so that it would not be seen from the Way.  The only indication that there was anyone camped in the scrub that night was the slight depression of the grass that the man had made when he forayed off the Way in search of the clearing. He had tried to return the grasses to their original condition for he did not wish to be found.

This man was a wanderer; a rare kind of person these days, for the land that had once been the prospering Realm of Wallalute kept close tabs on anyone who travelled away from their home village. The current ruler, Emperor Ronir of the Pancruti Empire was paranoid that the people of these lands would rebel against him if they were given the smallest amount of freedom.  However, this man had wandered for so long that he had become legend. Many troubadours told tales of his exploits; of how many times he had evaded capture by the Pancruti Talent Seekers and of how many times he had saved mage-born children from their grasp. There was a high price on his head given to anyone of the region if they could bring him in to face the Emperor's Justice, but for over four hundred and fifty years, no one had been able to capture him to turn him in.

He rolled over in his sleep and kicked out at something imaginary in his dream. His foot nearly came into contact with the embers, but by some fluke of luck or by natural instinct he pulled his foot back before it hit. He sat up, but if anyone had been looking at him, they would have thought him still asleep. His eyes were not focused on anything, and he seemed to be in a daze.

"I would never want to learn from you, traitor," he said, talking in his sleep to an invisible enemy. "I Promise that I will not rest until Benaedin's Promise is fulfilled."

He blinked and opened his eyes sharply and reached for the point at his hip where his sword usually sat. It took him a while to realise that it wasn't there and to take in his surroundings. He had been dreaming.

"That has never been so vivid, though. Not since it happened." He drew his grey cloak around him a little tighter and placed another piece of firewood onto the embers. There were still several hours until dawn and he had a long hike before him the next day.

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19th March, 2008. 5:54 pm. A Challenge for myself

Ok, I keep procrastinating from my uni work, so I have decided to make it a little more productive than just wander the internet, not looking at anything in particular. My challenge to myself is to write 500 words per day on a story of my choice, and to post it here for people to read. I will keep posting even if no-one comments on my posts, but comments are always welcome, both the 'more more more' kind and constructive criticism. This will be cross posted to [info]allasomething, so that my friends there who haven't friended this journal know what I'm doing. Hopefully I'll be able to keep up with it.

There may be some overlap of stories, as I notice that I also have parts of two different drafts of Benaedin's Promise sitting on here already. Bear with me when this happens - or tell me if you preferred one version over the other or something :).

Enjoy!

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4th November, 2007. 8:22 am. Its that time of the year again...

Its NaNo time! here's the first installment.

Benaedin's Promise behind the link )

Comment and there'll be more posted :)

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9th November, 2006. 4:18 am. 'hunter Installment 3

Here we go again :)

And remember comments get more of the story posted :p

hunter Chapter One Part 3 )

'hunter Chapter Two Installment One )

enjoy!

Current mood: energetic.

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7th November, 2006. 12:04 pm. Benaedin's Promise

Upon Kate's request:

Cut for length, Benaedin's Promise Installment two )

I might post more later, but for now I need to work on NaNoWriMo.

Enjoy!

Current mood: busy.
Current music: the gentle hum of a computer.

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5th November, 2006. 5:29 am. 'hunter Installment 2

Here's the next part:

'hunter Chapter One Part 2 )

Enjoy :)

Current music: Cap in Hand - The Proclaimers.

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1st November, 2006. 1:14 am. NaNoWriMo is here :)

And here is the first installment of my story:

'hunter, Installment one ) And rember, I won't post any more unless I get comments :p

Current mood: busy.
Current music: The Proclaimers.

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29th October, 2006. 7:59 pm. NaNoWriMo is almost here...

Ok, so I've finally made up my mind that my NaNo story is going to be posted here :) Under cuts of course. Be warned, however, that there will be little to no editing done on it myself - not until the end of November anyway, and it probably won't be posted here.

However, I think in order to... encourage more story to be posted. I'm going to request that people post comments :p :).

So, it starts on Wednesday - 50000 words in (less than) one month for me (stupid exams).

Oh also - other people - join up :) The more people doing it that you know, the more fun it is :D

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8th September, 2006. 8:36 pm. Benaedin's Promise

So this is basically a story idea that I have been working on since I was about 13. Its morphed and changed and grown almost a life of its own since then. It details the usual fantasy ideals of a prophecy to be fulfilled. Enjoy!

Cut for length - Benaedin's Promise, Installment one )

Current mood: calm.

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